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Tuesday, June 8, 2010

do i love him....

do i love him or just need him for pains,
if i love him then why cnt i feel d same,
am i cheating him or is it my nature,
oh these thoughts r just torture....
do i love him...

many dreams n hopes unfulfilled,
do i expect more or is it his way to fill.
or is it d time at guilt.
had i not promised him for lifetime,
or do i need sometime..
do i love him...

am i feeling neglected,
but i do knw his problem,
he gives me what i want,
n i treat him as my God,
but practically he is not...
do i love him...

should i give it another chance,
or let it flow in free lance.
it is also true dat i adore him.
but i want to love him
not for my needs but for my life..
do i love him...

enough now..
for no doubt he is my life,
and YES I LOVE HIM...
its the only way to say,
YES I LOVE HIM AND I NEED HIM FOR MY STAY....

6 comments:

  1. you started nicely..but seemed to losing the grip in the end.
    But as a first timer it is good.keep writing.
    The topic is nice though. :)

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  2. thnks anurag for ur precious comments...i will surely follow ur advice....:)

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  3. it is really great shilpy.......love u...

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  4. Some how I feel connected to this.
    I am actually, but then, not really, I mean not entirely.
    It was good.
    Keep writing.

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